Thursday, March 6, 2008

Outline for Plymouth Essay
I. Introduction
A. Thesis statement [sample: The founding of English colonies in modern Massachusetts combined a strange mix of idealism and violence.]
B. Preview first major point (without support) [Miles Standish contributed important protection to the early colonies by using violence.]
C. Preview second major point (without support) [ Benjamin Church provided vital leadership to protect the colonies during King Philip's War.]
D. Preview third major point (without support) [Despite all of this violence, the colonies were also founded on religious idealism.]
E. Significance of Thesis [It is important to understand the full history of these areas because this is what Americans generally consider to be our nation's beginning.]

II. First Major Point
A. Statement of position (or point)
B. Detail of support
C. Detail of Support
D. Detail of Support
E. Significance of position (how it relates to thesis?)

III. Second Major Point
A. Statement of position (or point)
B. Detail of support
C. Detail of Support
D. Detail of Support
E. Significance of position (how it relates to thesis?)

IV. Third Major Point
A. Statement of position (or point)
B. Detail of support
C. Detail of Support
D. Detail of Support
E. Significance of position (how it relates to thesis?)

V. Conclusion
A. Restate thesis (not re-write)
B. Restate significance of first
. Restate significance of second position
D. Restate significance of third position
E. Summary of paper (why is it important)

The founding of English colonies in modern Massachusetts combined a strange mix of idealism and violence. Miles Standish contributed important protection to the early colonies by using violence. Benjamin Church provided vital leadership to protect the colonies during King Philip's War. Despite all of this violence, the colonies were also founded on religious idealism. It is important to understand the full history of these areas because this is what Americans generally consider to be our nation's beginning.

Miles standish was a small man but he easly intimadated an out of controle english men named Tommis Morto. Then he killed an inden named wituwamat with his own knife. Miles also broke into an indens house and scared them so bad they tryed to run through walls he did this well looking for an inden that he thought was trying to get other indens to atack the callenys.

Benjamin Church protected the callenys by using his leadership skills for example he managed to get 20 of his men out of being killed by 300 mad inden. Then church made a plan to kill king Phillup he did this by driveing him like dear. Then Church and 6 of his men took over 60 men and put them in jail.

The pillgrums came over here to have freedom of religon. They also came here for a better life with more food land a better house. They think that they will make a perfect city and that everyone will wont to copy them and try to be just like them.

Thursday, February 14, 2008








They are gentle, loving, faithful, lacking in all guile and trickery. The words denoting lying, deceit, greed, envy, slander, and forgiveness have never been heard. They have no jealousy, no sense of possession.--John Smith (character)








We shall make a new start. A fresh beginning. Here the blessings of the earth are bestowed upon all. None need grow poor. Here there is good ground for all, and no cost but one's labor. We shall build a true common wealth, hard work and self reliance our virtues. We shall have no landlords to rack us with high rents or extort the fruit of our labor. --John Smith (character)








Friday, October 19, 2007

The Colombian Exchange transformed the world in a more radical (awesome) way than any other development in world history. One significant effect of this process (is a naturally occurring or designed sequence of changes) was the establishment of the Triangle Trade. While many factors were a part of the Triangle Trade, the rapid growth in both supply and demand for new commodities was the largest motivating element. This time period may be best associated (to join as a partner) with economic developments, but it is impossible to analyze (to examine carefully) this period without considering the intense social impact that the Triangle Trade had on those involved. In truth, a full understanding can only be gained by appreciating (to be thankful) how economic and social factors (result) impact each other in history.

The Colombian Exchange changed the world more than any other development in world history one important effect of these changes was the establisment of the Triange Trade. while many factors were a part of the Triangle Trade, the quick growth in supply and demand for new commodities were the largest motivating thing. this time period might be the the best partner with economic developments, but it is impossible to study the period without thinking of the social impact of that the triangle trade had on the involved. A full understanding can only be gainded by being thankful to how economic and results impact each other.

Monday, September 24, 2007